wtf???? i was looking forward to seeing him in the nba. according to the news, oden isn't new to injury. he gets hurt alot. damn. i knew blazers should of picked up durant.
Man this guy is bad news...sorry to any blazers fans but I, as well as a lot of the coaches and trainers that worked him out, have a bad feeling about this guy. Not just cause of the injuries but some of the weird findings in his physical with the way his body is misproportioned and asymmetrical...plus i think he was overrated as a player to begin with.
Well now i'm not sure if you're posting that quote to say that you were mistaken and you understand now, or as proof that i did claim to have worked out with him.
in case we're dealing with the latter, i'll point out that the structure of that sentence indicates that the "bad feeling about this guy" is what I share with the coaches and trainers, not having worked out with him. It's all about comma placement my friend
pit that sentence is incorrect, its called a dangeling modifier, my english teacher would have a hay day with that sentence pointing out stupid little incorrections, i won't go into detail but hopefully you get the jist of it.
i got straight A's in english through HS and college, but i must admit i don't remember what a "dangling modifier" is. So if you wanna go into detail feel free, cause the sentence seems clear to me.
"A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that modifies a word not clearly stated in the sentence. A modifier describes, clarifies, or gives more detail about a concept."
so for your sentence you should of put, "as well as a lot of the coaches and trainers that worked him out, I have a bad feeling about this guy."
understand now? if not let me know and ill try to explain it better.
